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Posted on Nov 18th, 2006 by Lobster John : Peaceful Fool Lobster John


i'm falling for you...

laying naked and helpless

waiting for your rake.
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Joy Bringer : Visionary Creator & Artivist
about 6 hours later
Joy Bringer said

So expressive & moving Haiku master…

waiting for the rake
                                                            vulnerable after the fall
                                                                                                                            let yourself be touched

Dana : Life Weaver
about 9 hours later
Dana said

Response to line one:  Awww, shucks.
Response to line two:  hmmmmmmm
Response to line three:  Okay, I get it now.

Great work.  :)

Emily : Poets Voice
8 months later
Emily said

Lovely Haiku

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